Kloud_Paradizo

it's okay if characters did not follow the canon. just make it reasonable with plot and settings then it's all good.

no no no. I didn't mean the characters have to strictly follow the canon. just commented it to see if that was intentional lol

Greyfia in this chapter feels a little off but still align-able with the canon.

please do not care about those saying you write for money. are there anyone could survive in modern society without job? that's because we need money! lol we can do it in moderation then don't give a shite about the hatres lol

Make sure you have a clear concept of your story first then just carefully review the constructive comments and leave the rude ones.

so what are we suggesting? I hope it's not including selling self into her peerage?

I think MC will meet Morgan in Lostbelt #6

Reduce her boobs to nothing!! lol

Dear author, I'll be serious here... The only problem I am having with this fic is... why... why don't you have a Patreon page with twenty more chapters for me... sighhh I want more ... lol

honestly I think mc is a bit like a person at labor work level. no offense. it was because he was honest, blunt but sometimes to the level to almost considered rude and seems preferred to act without thinking lol