It will get better. It's hard to formulate a perfect picture with so many leading characters at once but we are working on it. And we appreciate your comments. The MC is still a working progress since it's the first 30 chapters. In the upcoming chapters he will be overpowered. (just wait and see pls) It's my first novel . . . Thank you for reading. I don't mind the hate it helps to know what you really want so we can learn and provide it.