DuskArcanist
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I have no clue how the author is juggling through so many different books, but kudos to you. You're able to create convincing characters in this one and I look forward to more!
There definitely is a lack of updates to be seen. I would also say work on less rumbustious descriptions, they are sometimes a bit much to read. Overall though, good beginning to a story and I hope you continue writing and get into a consistent groove of it. :P
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