I'm enjoying the story so far. I can't wait for more

.......this is where it begins. Poor guy

I'm curious to see more interactions between him and the captain

oh 😶

I Wish there were more chapters, because now I'm left wondering.........what's gonna happen now!!!

I'm enjoying the story so far, and I Can't help but be interested. I can't wait for the next chapter

interesting

can't wait for more chyapters

I want to see what happens next, what will they do. I've been waiting for an interaction between class A and izuku 👍

hopefully no harem

this better not turn into a harem

i can't wait for more

ah......chaos, what a great chapter, but now i have to wonder..............what's next. I Can't help but be excited, but thanks to you author, the wait for another chapter will be hell........😑

makes sense 😐

sure, I've noticed that you don't use enough pronouns(He, she), which makes reading feel weird and fake in some way. You want your story to flow and connect, which leads to another problem I noticed. you don't use commas, you use periods. when you use periods for everything, it makes your story feel like it's starting and ending over and over again. so try adding more commas.

I finally caught up to the latest chapter, all I can say is that the story is good, but the writing quality isn't. now don't get me wrong, I've seen worse out there, but the writing mistakes are noticeable and numerous. but like I said, this is a good story so, can't wait for more 👍

another day, another chapter, I can't wait for more. though I'm curious to see how everyone's relationships will grow

honestly, I can't wait to see more, i want MORE FIGHTS!!!! I'm excited

😑 what is this

The story is interesting, it's more than your typical evil izuku story. It explains how and why the events happened the way they did, and it does this exceptionally well, by providing the pov of other characters, and though you may not see a lot of izuku's pov.when it does arrive, it's even more exciting. Though sometimes it can be a bit long until you see his pov. Overall i recommend this story, the writing quality is good, and even though it's a fanfic, the way it leads to each event, feels like a different story. for people who don't like a story that involves multiple pov's, this story may not be for you, but I suggest giving it a try 👍