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I like this one

Hello, Writers block with sky island, scrapped so many drafts as it not keeping true to what I want and hope for the story. I have drafted the test but then my drafts and finish products are always different. I am also writing another books at the same time which is not getting as much love as this (heartbroken) I will try to push a few chapters out soon.

true, i already altered the direction Robin. Supposed to thinking of them as the original strawhat, I'm just looking at them as children, Nami, Nojiko, Coby, Helmppo, Chopper, Sanji, Zoro, Jonny, Yosaku all of them as marines not just the 7 more so although Luffy has a lot of responsibility I don't think I would put him as a captain (since the story is not about him). in a few chapters you will see why even if they didn't meet in the academy as they did in the story, they would have to meet at the end of the book.

Kembali dan baca beberapa bab kembali. Saya melakukan hal yang sama! Saya memiliki banyak draf tetapi untuk membuat cerita terhubung saya harus melakukannya.

I was going with the they are predestined to meet but then again I just realised in all my draft I never gave them any spot light pass them gathering…

Hello All! I am the Author of this book. It is with great pleasure that I share with you a book which I wrote when times were hard during the pandemic. It was lost and forgotten due to my other work "The Greatest Marine in Onepiece Universe", I only recently rediscovered it and I have fallen in love with the story once more. I want to share this story of a boy called Caleb as he makes his way through a world where martial arts is the foundation but the enemy is hidden, the mastermind behind all the destruction. What side will Caleb stand on? will he become the champion for the people or their oppressor? Find out in the Book 1: Caleb's Martial Journey!

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Thanks, i guess so. I was very keen on keeping to the timeline and connecting the story to what I had in the ending that I had to throw in Luffy and his lot without changing their connections

He gets the fruit in v1. gets info from marines about fruit in v1. V3 he gets o find out what the fit really is

Im just very busy at the moment. Travelling for work or Looking after the kids (schools are on holiday). I am not going to drop it. We will all get to the end together.