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This was picked, so where are the chapters ?!

This novel seriously needs a mass release #hint #hint 😉😄

Same.. she really shouldn't have said anything since she didn't keep her promise to protect him at all

Hahahahahaha I knew it! Appraiser Yan must belong to the evil appraisers!

Aaaand we're back to no chapters ... -.-

FL lived in that family for FOUR YEARS. She knows there's a doctor at home, duh

Usually I like this novel, but c'mon a little common sense never hurts

And lets not forget that the police are all trained professionals who are on the scene of active shooting but have 'not come to their senses yet' from the shock... pfft

So he's hurt and none of the professionals are attempting to stop the bleeding, secure the scene and such and are instead talking about bureaucracy and allowing civilians to remain on scene where more shooters can be present. Author, before writing action scenes, please inform yourself by watching crime/action movies, tv shows, reading books or at least attempt to think logically about a scene and not just focus on the outcome 'he man saved his woman and she grateful and feeling guilty he got hurt on her behalf will nurse him to health, stay by his side, forgive him everything and fall in love again'... -.-

Seriously? What is he, a Superman with supernaturally good hearing and sight that he could see a sniper? Are you kidding me? If hero-saving-damsel-in-distress situation was needed, at least make it more believable like one of the wounded enemies pulled a hidden gun to try and complete the mission or some such -.-