Katherine_Emmett

sect leader rise to the top is the name

the author addressed the reason for only gathering one in the chapter that he used the sub-core thing go back and read that

the author forgot to put the she thought and then it would have been correct

I believe it was to show the difference between her thinking and the narrator speaking

he/she has more comments which get pretty aggressive to the author I just got tired of seeing that and spoke up

I think what was meant was only one connection like the police can only talk to the police things like that while the phone can talk to Jimmy at the mall and Tom at the theater at different times in completely different places

I think it was a reference for us readers

so laugh when a person dies laugh when a dog or cat die laugh when you die laugh when a person jumps of a building... my point is there is a time and place to laugh and laugh at a person giving support/at the author is just plain rude.

... really this is his first novel all you have to do is stay quiet and let the new author have support and not laugh at the people that acual enjoy and on this sight there are a lot more trash novels where a few mistakes here and there it still make it a lot better then some of the novels I read I understand if you don't like it but still you are trashing on the author first few chapter ever wrote you are not giving the author time to learn how to fix them and all you are doing is trashing on this new author for trying there best without reading all of it you don't have a right to judges the people who have and believe in the author to improve the whole story including the start my whole problem is not that you don't like the novel many people don't like some novels I an having trouble that you were laughing every thing you said was about the early chapters so could you please stop commenting about what you do not fully know about that is all I ask also I am not a new reader I have been reading both online and paper books for 10 years now.

also I fully say that the start was bad at first but the author really improved as you go further all you have said in the reply is that you are only on the early chapters the whole thing is free watch as a naive young mc become a confident strong leader