Justthatdude_GG05

This is the second book by this author and by far the best one, I can tell they have gotten better at writing and that they put more effort into the book. The grammar and story is just way better overall.

Damn

Damn imagine being that useless

So far so good, the story is decent and the characters are well thought out. I am looking forward to more chaps. The only thing I think could be done better is phrasing and a few spelling errors could be fixed. And maybe the best part but no system is in it...yet let's hope it stays that way!