Deadline_423

I’ve been hearing that this novel is stolen and was tooken from space battles. The stories are very similar. Search up path of ruin on spacebattles

If you are planning on going that route I suggest the oubliette. It was used by the sith to help them live for thousands of years

Alot of the words are getting mushed together.

Do you mesn you walked to your room

The thing I don agree with is the pay wall becsuse the world may be somewhat concept but the games his charac make aren’t. Therefore I believe for there to be an actual paywall then it should be complety orginal, games and all.

Need to space out some words, some of them are merged together.

Such a way with words you have. A being that goes down the path of darkness but differently.

Thanks for the chapter