syrus0star

absolutely garbage literally first chapter the OC becomes a Slave his power literally amounts to absolutely nothing the worst fucking story I have found in the past year

this isn't patreon stop advertising your fucking stupid shit here it is always trash and always be trash

.... author has no concept of what a story should be plot wise

I'd like to give a better review I really would but the grammar is so physically bad I felt like I had a fucking stroke reading the first chapter

so poor riding at best couldn't even get past the fucking first five chapters it's so bad

nn.0m nme3

Honestly there's like no story middle of it and it's pretty pointless it's not even a reincarnation story or transmigration you might as well just have an OC character because the characters memories literally get erased Midway through the story

People only use this website to post ads for the patreon don't deserve a good reply whoever wants whoever sees this reply don't waste your time with the story it's not worth the investment

anything past chapter like four is absolute garbage there is zero plot I've never seen a story that had so much potential but turned into such a absolute dumpster fire so fast

Seems like it could be great but I honestly can't say because there isn't enough chapters to go off of yet and I will gladly give a high review if there is