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No consistency with already written words. Brainless MC. Not knowing the original character's mindset and personality.
good work, don't drop 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
I've liked it so far. Just some grammatical issues at times but not many of them. so, keep it up man!
Try to include some other shows characters like if u are going with the whole doctor thing u can include shows like House, or some other comedy shows like big bang theory. Just a suggestion.
Is this going to be a thing where no single topic ever reaches a proper conclusion?
The story and character development is very good. The only issue would be grammar as there are some mistakes but still readable and able to understand.Good Work👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
skip to fairy tail reunion, if u want to add something use flashbacks later.
Ultear: cause why not
Good one and kind of complete story with not leaving plots unattended. Good work🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟🤟
Take all the power stones u want. But keep the chaps coming.👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👌👈👉👆👇☝️👍🤘🤟🤟✌️