Adam_Dante

Wheel of time

I see Chinese names I leave

The novel began with an amazing pace, the start with the training, then going to the world of Absolver was okay, but after going to DarkSouls the quality went downhill.

It was all good, but now I see more and more grammar mistakes. .. ..

You said that his hair turned ash gray when he first turned into a neo demon but now his hair is black....

That's because there is some rich dude pumping stones and adds on the novel.

I think author doesn't even give a glance at our comments....

*Slap

If the system is some sort of remnant of a woman's will, or she is some higher being... then this is really stupid and generic, I've read tons of similar novels…. I hope not

It started well with minor mistakes, then it went down hill. It's full of plot holes, maths in this novel is a clusterfuck. I don't suggest reading this.