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Vara_

Vara_

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I'm a tall couch potato that loves watching ballet auditions and epic fail videos. I don't like strawberries, they just tasted so yucky. I'm a very college student and I love the color black

2020-06-18 đã tham giaNigeria
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1.9h

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25
  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    trả lời Suigetsu_yolo_9736

    There are complaints about the length of the synopsis but that'll be fixed in due time. The first 5 Chapters of the book was written at a very young age and I haven't been able to fully edit them. I hope you see some changes in the remaining chapters. Thank you!

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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    trả lời Suigetsu_yolo_9736

    A man in a relationship, I know, actually said this to his girlfriend.

    Joel pops his head from the kitchen where he just finished eating dinner. "Hey piece of shit, dinner was good today. The kitchen is dirty, go clean it up."
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    trả lời Suigetsu_yolo_9736

    It's just an intro on the ML. As the story progresses, he'll describe himself.

    Xavier Morreti is the stereotypic billionaire CEO. He fits the perfect drop-dead gorgeous playboy who could get whatever he wanted with the snap of his finger. All this were true, except for one thing. He couldn't get 'everything' he wanted. He wants release, badly. Release, both sexually and emotionally. He is almost desperate. His manhood would hurt once in a while. He had even gone to the hospital for a checkup but they say nothing wrong. He is bothered.
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    trả lời Suigetsu_yolo_9736

    Lol. It's just 3 sentences and a short one. Thanks

    After she is done, she decides to get prepared for work. She lets down her long curly hair-that stops below her butt-hoping that it would cover her now bandaged temple. And it did, as usual. She dresses in her work clothes then rides her bicycle down to the restaurant she waits for, but that was not after preparing lunch because if she didn't, Joel would flip and probably finish the job this time.
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    trả lời Suigetsu_yolo_9736

    I get what you mean but... moving it to a new paragraph confuses.

    She remains on the cold floor some more before she wills her body to move from the floor to the attic where she gets cleaning materials to clean off the blood from the floor, according to Joel's words; "Clean this floor because it's more expensive than 15 of you, freak." Then he stormed out. That was 3 hours ago.
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    trả lời Suigetsu_yolo_9736

    I meant to use italics and bold but Webnovel doesn't have those features.

    But, you know what? It is okay. My boyfriend loves me, she thought. It had been, yet again, a mistake. Joel came back drunk and asked for sex, which Natalie would have gladly given if she wasn't so sore and ached bad. And right there and then, he didn't have to go to the gym.
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
     công bố

    Incredible synopsis! Amazing plotline... I love Hitomi as a character! I'm tempted to reveal spoilers but I'm not that mean. lol😂 awaiting your next update!

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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    Player? That sounded so slick l😂

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    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    Player? That sounded so slick😂

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    The Isekai Game: Odin's Eye
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    shit's getting real

    Ch 2 All Pain
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    it's okay... It's fine. (hiring assassins for our lovely Author)

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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    O.o keyuuuute!

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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
     công bố

    Adeline is my hot bae! I love the storyline! When I added this book in my library and read the first two Chapters, I was like... WOAH! why haven't I read this before! I love the character's personality. There are punctuation errors and a slight default in POVs but that's something you can work on! So Author, Get prepared! 'cos you have a loyal fan to spam you silly comments! [img=update][img=coins][img=recommend]

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    The Bride of The Second Prince (English)
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    You monster! But he sounds hot so I'll let it pass, this time.[img=faceslap]

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    The Bride of The Second Prince (English)
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    Swoon swoon. Somebody catch me!

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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    You mighty ****er! Let me at him!

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    The Bride of The Second Prince (English)
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    No! Erwin 😭

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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
    bình luận

    Just a little suggestion: Do not place a full-stop after a question mark. The question mark already has its own point. It's like writing two full-stops at the end of the sentence. 👍

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    The Bride of The Second Prince (English)
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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
     công bố

    Hello! Thank you for clicking on this story to read. I'm going to be uploading frequently. Leave reviews and comments because it makes me smile! Thank you, boo bees!

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  • Vara_
    Vara_3yr
     công bố

    Loved the first chapter! It was pretty long and I didn't quite see any Character names till the end? It is kinda like a turnoff. But, apart from all these, I absolutely loved it! I expect more updates.

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