Nickman2933

why isekai for no reason what

whats this from

look man i didn't want to drop it but you can't have a book called my undeath then have him become a living human in a couple of chapter

that was qi opening

why didn't he sense them

no true before it or is it bc its sealed

I alway like these yes he will get his revenge its just not an end goal

if she is such a genius why is she a teacher

the idea is solid it just needs description like instead of just say he went into a dungeon and cleared it go in to how he exactly used his skills where he stabbed the enemy what effect a skill has on the enemy body not just he had a 5 hour fight with the boss then won also show a description for every skill its ok if you do some of the fast past stuff but use it more like time skips when he is stronger

this is not a story it is just a series of events in like a bullet point manne its so fast no detail at all its always I did thes then I did this witch killed him then sold this then got this skill there is no story