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BleachedKage5x010 days ago
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Missing word in the first sentence
"Just a few short of term announcements. First years should note that the forest on the grounds is forbidden to all students," the headmaster said. "Quidditch trials will be held two weeks from now, and any further clarifications will be handled by Madam Hooch."
Harry Potter: The Saviour's Awakening
Book&Literature · Midnight_Wonder
BleachedKage5x010 days ago
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This should be 1991 unless this is an AU change. Canon harry was born in 1980.
1st September, 2001
Harry Potter: The Saviour's Awakening
Book&Literature · Midnight_Wonder
BleachedKage5x010 days ago
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Thanks for the chapter. The paragraph separation is missing and making it a pain to read.
Ch 13 CH 13
Harry Potter:Golden Wizard
Movies · Easy_Fiction
BleachedKage5x0a month ago
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"Weeeel...." I trail off for a moment before offering her my trademark doom-bringer gin "How do you feel about helping me trail a cult of Hermetics and slaughtering them to the last? It will be just like old times!"
Skyrim: A Sorcerer's Tale
Video Games · Rastislav
BleachedKage5x02 months ago
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This wall of text is hard to read
He continued through the rooms until he reached a large hall, where there was a large wolf dozing in the center of it. "So this is the final room with the boss..." He thought as he read the dungeon instruction before using the key, he knew he needed to defeat this creature before leaving this place. After preparing himself by tightening his dagger and wand in each hand, he started by casting a bombard spell, a spell that flew straight at the wolf, waking it up with the explosion and burning its body. The wolf woke up in pain, surprised and growling, it looked at Snape at the entrance and leaped towards his attacker. Snape didn't waste time, he moved in a spinning motion with the dagger in his hand and cast another bombard spell, charging at the wolf, which dodged the attack and ran towards the small wizard. Snape, seeing it coming, ran against the wolf and threw himself on the ground, passing through the wolf's fangs as he skidded sliding quickly on the ground, grabbing a fur under the wolf, he spun his dagger and sliced its belly, while the wolf howled in pain. Snape and the wolf moved away from each other, staring at each other the next moment. The wolf, wounded, growled and opening its mouth, Snape was surprised when it accumulated from the mouth and launched a lightning bolt in his direction. Snape, still surprised, quickly used a protective spell, but a bit late, which made him be thrown back by the impact with his shield breaking. He fell a bit far, but his body withstood the impact after all his training. He got up quickly, before the wolf could get closer to deliver the final blow. He sliced the wolf's leg with the dagger and cast a bombard spell on its head, making the wolf fly a few meters and fall in pain. The wolf, still not giving up, growled at Snape, as its mouth opened to launch another lightning strike. Snape used his agility to run, while the lightning passed straight by him. He approached the wolf and cast a "Lumos" to blind it before approaching, as he did with the serpent in the desert. With its vision limited, the wolf didn't see Snape coming, who immediately jumped on it, using his physical strength and plunged the dagger into its head, making the wolf shake in pain. But Snape didn't give up, he saw that the wolf tried to open its mouth to launch another lightning bolt. Then, he took his wand, while still embedded with the other hand in its head, and cast a bomb inside its mouth, making it explode immediately and fall to the ground the next moment.
HP - Shadow Monarch!
Anime & Comics · RaccoonLeague
BleachedKage5x02 months ago
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Elective classes are not supposed to start until third year
On a crisp, clear morning that hinted at the onset of autumn, Izzy found herself walking toward her first elective class, Care of Magical Creatures. The path wound its way toward the edge of the Forbidden Forest, a location that struck a delicate balance between the safety of Hogwarts and the wild, untamed magic that lay within the woods. The air was fresh, carrying the earthy scent of moss and leaves, mixed with the faint aroma of distant rain.
Izanami Black
Book&Literature · Undead_Raptor
BleachedKage5x02 months ago
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This is not the first spell they learn. In the movies they skipped the first lesson which was Lumos and instead moved right to Halloween which is levitation.
"The Levitation Charm, also known as Wingardium Leviosa, is a very useful spell," Flitwick explained. "It allows you to make objects fly and is particularly helpful for moving things without physical effort. Now, the key to this charm is the swish and flick motion. Watch closely."
Izanami Black
Book&Literature · Undead_Raptor
BleachedKage5x03 months ago
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Thanks for cutting the song short
For I am a Thinking Cap! ♪♫
Hogwarts Emerald
Book&Literature · Dragonel23
BleachedKage5x03 months ago
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Inanimate into animate transfiguration is too advanced for first year.
"Vincent, can you help me with this?" Blaise asked, holding up his notes. "I can't seem to get the hang of turning a teapot into a tortoise."
From Hitman to Hogwarts
Movies · MbthehunterN7
BleachedKage5x03 months ago
Replied to Krio_Genix
Yes, that is why the teams were numbered 1 through 10 except for team 9 which was still in use. The other teams are only background characters though, so they are very forgettable.
'Just seven?... there should be nine, according to Iruka. Looks like we are still missing two.'
Naruto: The Otherworldly Cultivator
Anime & Comics · Krio_Genix

Naruto's Ice Dragon