Jennifer_Giese

Love how fast paced the story is. updates are excellent. story and character development is fast paced. Character design has lots of different personalities. World background is reminisce of a typical fantasy roleplaying /elderscrolls feel to it.

Wow he keeps that up who knows how many lives he is going to live lol. Nice turn of events. So any more background on the Shadow Walker? She sounds intriguing. Wonder how old she really is.

Love the story so far .Quests and puzzles! :) Looking forward to reading more of your chapters. Wish i had more stones to vote with. Keep writing!

Lol A Basic Torch. Sounds like every quest reward in every game .

A little bit of weird start to the story, and woosh jumped right into action almost like the two was conducting an experiment of some sort of soul/life energy travel with a little hint of romance waiting in the outer edges.

Sounds like a long running experiment of soul jumping . Wondering what those two are trying to achieve? Hmm the mystery continues....

A cute Beginning to what sounds like a love story.