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Dave_Guest1dtrả lời Robi_Kenobi99Yeah, it’s a little overused. But not that much in marvel. As for afo, it should be empty. So he needs to accumulate the strength by himself.
[Power]- Dave_Guest1dbình luận
I Think the sharingan would be perfekt for him. I know its pretty standard, but with the perception boost, he would be much stronger but not yet overpowered. I always loved kamui. Make it evolvable without weakness, but hard work to reach the full potential. The the next one should be an upgrade of the body. A unique idea could be one for all. Like everyone should know its an accumulation type of quirk. So as long, as the wealder trains he gets stronger. With this you could give his body limitless potential without instantly being op. Last should be something for the soul. But with this one you need to think about on your own
[Power] - Dave_Guest1mthbình luận
I think with the new series ATLA would be nice. And then expand to Korra. You can make the series a little more serious.
So yes the original story is coming eventually, after Horizon, and most likely one other fanfic is done. (Either ATLA, Korra, Or Fairy Tail, still undecided so feel free to let me know what you'd like) - Dave_Guest5mthbình luận
Try purple
Valeria Richards(Pics) - Dave_Guest5mthbình luận
Ultramarines?
"Black Templars." - Dave_Guest6mthbình luận
I wouldn’t create too many serums or add any more powers to the Mc. I would try to destroy the negatives of the vampirism. If you add any of those OP Serums or anything like that it will ruin the mood of twilight. And the MC can already grow his advantages without all the tinkering.
(a/n: comment some other serum/improvements the mc could make, I don't remember a lot of them. It doesn't matter what fiction it's from, I'll look into any suggestion and go from there.) - Dave_Guest6mthbình luận
Will his eye grwo back?
Grisha's face was shaky now, his imminent fear rising. No, not because of the Founder Titan's words but because of the person behind him in a jacket... Whose eye was glowing in purple unmitigated rage. - Dave_Guest7mthbình luận
I would have chosen the mother.
Jake thought about it. He could pick Luke, Anakin, Revan, and Yoda. But as he thought he remembered Galen Marik. Marik, while not appearing in anything after the force unleashed games and tie-in media, showed he had enormous potential that was unexplored. His force potential alone seemed to rival Vader and Sidious . He made his choice, and God nodded. "As you wish." Jake was then consumed by a flash of light. - Dave_Guest8mthbình luậnCh -1 Mc powers and images.
- Dave_Guest8mthbình luận
This is interesting, but you should integrate Whitebeard in the magic system. And it would be really funny, if he was as big as in the original. And of course please deage him.
Fairy Tail Whitebeard - Dave_Guest8mthbình luận
Apocalypse is his father for sure. At least I don’t remember any other old strong earthling. And I think Hela fought him at some point.
On the other hand he's absolutely terrifying… that unbelievably high affinity for death, the vision I and many other seers felt before his birth, plus the fact he's half midgardian. - Dave_Guest8mthbình luận
Ne careful with those special writings. Some fanfics were banned because of it.
S̸̢̻͔̬̿ò̸̱̮̀̅̓̈́ ̶̺̗͍̝̉͋̓̓̀I̷͖̖̮̓͜ͅ ̷̺̪͌̓̆͝h̷̯̟̙̻̝̓͘o̶̭͍͂͂̽p̷̫̓́̾e̷̛͈̣̥̮̺͐̑̀ ̶̡̨̢͌̓͋i̷̥̊̚͠ͅt̷̮̼̓ ̷̰̦̙͓̰̅͌l̸̛̰͍̓̌̓ͅä̴̩́s̶̨͈͉̍̈̀̾̀t̶̬̜̼͌̅̾͋s̴̛͚̻͑ ̵̡͙̬̬̲̓͆̎͝f̸̖̳̻̗̾ò̷͜r̸̜̬̓̉̔e̶̢̮̖͒̏v̸̧̢̡͈̌̈̒̐ḛ̴̘̩̘̓̾͘ŗ̷͔̯̓͘ͅ.̵̣̲̮̆ - Dave_Guest10mthbình luận
Should have sacrificed that stupid plot armor.
Finally she smiled warmly at him," That was just a test. Your wish will be granted and you would not need to sacrifice any of your abilities either. Contrary I will provide a very useful gift for your future endeavors in the marvel universe." - Dave_Guest1yrbình luận
Well there would be: Omni force Void force Origin force Force of Devouring
Author Rant: Now I have run into a problem, I can't figure out a name for Dante's force and I can't keep calling it 'the force' every time so I need suggestions.