Dave_Guest

Thanks for the chapter, but I personally am not that big of a fan of excessive manipulation. And manipulating love twists the mind.

I really like this story. Chapter could be a little longer, but the story development is nice and new. It’s not only about a powerhungry mc and with nice and funny plot twists

In one hand I love the idea, on the other I wanted him to exchange his body with a stronger body. Infinity for example.

To tell the truth I prefer just fire slayer magic. After all he fused all slayer magic into it. Or Origin fire slayer magic. Because everyone in fairytales searches the original magic. After that you can combine the elements into his fire and make different flames with different colors. And even after that you can fuse those elements like the dragon god and infuse them into his fire. And after combining all elements into his fire. That could be the Omni flame or something like that. Just an idea from me

You need to reinstall the app and login again. It’s not just this book.

A book with much potential. I hope the author keeps writing and doesn’t give up.

This story has too much Info dumps on techniques. Sometimes I think it’s a copy of the relevant wiki sites. Please author try to write those things more in your own style. You can even use AI to write it for you. But it’s getting repetitive and I really would enjoy to read how far your story goes.

Yeah, it’s a little overused. But not that much in marvel. As for afo, it should be empty. So he needs to accumulate the strength by himself.

I Think the sharingan would be perfekt for him. I know its pretty standard, but with the perception boost, he would be much stronger but not yet overpowered. I always loved kamui. Make it evolvable without weakness, but hard work to reach the full potential. The the next one should be an upgrade of the body. A unique idea could be one for all. Like everyone should know its an accumulation type of quirk. So as long, as the wealder trains he gets stronger. With this you could give his body limitless potential without instantly being op. Last should be something for the soul. But with this one you need to think about on your own

I think with the new series ATLA would be nice. And then expand to Korra. You can make the series a little more serious.