zhaderx

Thx

Thanks for the chap

I’m loving the feel of mystery here

The eldrich horror lol

My guy you really nailed the start of this novel! Good job! 👍

I disagree, all the things as been at comfortable pace without skipping essential parts, just summarizing it would ruin the great storytelling

Hands down one of the best starts to a novel I’ve read in a LOOOOOOOOOONG f#%king time, the cover was very confusing and I would have just dissmissed it if I wasn’t so bored.

Cool

Personally I quite like the parts where he reflects on himself, great authors make time for those moments and while your novel started of way to info dump heavy it getting better for each chapter, Ps I love the world building

This novel has some strong points and some weaker ones but I’d like to point out the attention to world building, it’s actually ok... which is rare