The HP stat is stupid, unless they are in a game " which they are not ".

it's not free though.

Author you might want to fix this

why is this not in English

The corn on the pizza is more of a crime then cutting it in square pieces.

You just have to put- Step, step, step. you don't have to put " another " in there

wtf, what happened to you, Ch.4 and Ch.5 were a total train wreck, were you high, drunk, both, Brain-dead or all three when you wrote these. Honestly what happened.

* It's supposed to be " No Superpowers " not now *

First, I understand having a health bar in a video game, mainly because that body is virtual and fake not real in a game. Second, not everyone would have that skill to "safely" disconnect there body parts nor does the Mc at the moment if he'll ever get it. Third I never mentioned poison and said " more refined version of what I said " if a LV.2000 taps a LV.1 Gently on the wrist with no poison and and now super powers it could do "lets say for context" 500,000 damage and instantly kill you for no reason

you should probably get rid of the (HP) setting in the story, it's just a stupid characteristic to have in a book. If you want to have us know his health or well being describe it to us, it's better than putting it in a numerical value like a health bar.Let's but it this way if he gets his head chopped off and it only does one damage and is still alive with no head, or if he gets tapped on the wrist and just dies because that little tap took all his health or more.

ok I like the story and got to CH.382, but the problem I keep having is that the pacing is all over the place, you are to slow in some parts and not slow enough in others, and you jump parts to much like recently when he got to the end of the trial you never said the verdict and did a time skip, skipping a bunch of things that could have improved the chapter and add better story building especially when Angie Prairie messaged someone else to help and leaving to much out, or when he was supposed to fight Leonardo you totally skipped it and only mentioned it in later chapters saying he lost not how and you didn't even explain the fight just that he lost, this fit easily could have been a chapter or to but you wasted it. That's all for now good story just try better with the pacing stop the crap ton of time skips and explain things better, this not only makes it better to the reader but also benefits the writer as well with coming up with ideas and a more solid foundation for the world building. Good days to you.

hey was this cancelled? If not when will be next update?

yo what's happening. is this not going to continue or what.

sorry but how long are we gonna have to wait for a new chapter. I understand that you are trying to focus on your other novel but posting chapter here and there can't hurt, right. I thank you for making novels and know it can be draining most of the time trying to keep schedule.

where are they

???