Daoist971076
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Daoist9710764dbình luậnshould prob add more tags
I also realized that the viewership of this fanfiction is very poor. Should I change the synopsis to attract more viewers? If yes, then please give tips as I don't know how to write a synopsis!- Daoist9710766dbình luậnCh 13 Soaring High.
- Daoist9710767dbình luậnI was curious to know how many of you still wish to see updates for this novel. If you're interested, please leave a comment with a raised hand emoji 🙋♂️ so I can get an idea of the level of interest here.
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need more chaps .. . . . . . . . . . . .
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i love it bro
I would like to hear your thoughts on this book. Are you enjoying it so far? Also, is the quality of the writing readable? Are there any grammar mistakes or issues that are hindering your reading experience? Your feedback will not only assist me but also enhance your enjoyment of the story. If there are any aspects of the story that you're not fond of, please let me know so I can address them. Constructive criticism is valuable and will help me improve the story. I encourage you all to read a few more chapters, as I believe this story has a lot of potential and is quite engaging. Thank you for your time and feedback. - Daoist9710761mthbình luậnMany found Lucas charming at that moment, but many others felt sour and jealous of him, as he was getting so much attention.
- Daoist9710762mthtrả lời akasuna123
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ain't reading allat
"*sigh*... Okay then, lets recall what happened in my first memories yesterday before I come back home last night, I hope its nothing bad..." He nodded to himself and scrunching his face to trying hard to remember, "Lets see... I have nasi pecel for breakfast, leaving my apartement, going to university by bus, arived safely in class then greet my friends, completing my coursework and give it to the teacher, the class over then hang out with friends, we eat rendang in warung padang for celebrating no more assignments for awhile until the next one come, walking with one of my female friends toward her home because her house in the same direction of my apartment, talking fun thing and joking with her while walking, then... I remembered that we were aproached by someone, if I recall, he is my female friend's ex-boyfriend, he glared hatefully at me then talked about how he still love my female friend, and she replied that she is no longer love him, but the dude insist that she must come back and marry him while he pulled her arm forcefully, worried that it will end badly, and as her good friend, I intervene by separate his hand from her arm. As if didn't like being interrupted he shouted loudly at me with angry red face, he accusing me that she leaving him because of me, wait... Does he think that I am is her new boyfriend? I'm trying to calm him down and explain that we were only good friend, but the dude not listening to me and pull something from his jacket, it was a knife, he suddenly went mad and thrust the knife to- HOLY SHIT! I DIED! I'VE BEEN KILLED!!" - Daoist9710762mthbình luận
brotha 💀
Initially, Carl had entertained the thought of taking Clarice as a child bride and gradually grooming her. But as time passed and they interacted more, he found himself touched by her tenderness, sensibility, and sensitivity. He simply wished to treat her kindly and bring a little more joy into her life. - Daoist9710763mthbình luận
next stage is probably greater mastery right?
[Proficiency: Lesser Mastery Sword Drawing Technique (0/200)] - Daoist9710763mthbình luận
must be a logia or a mythical or ancient zoan
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of course its strong, look at his 3 sons one is a pirate king, one is an emperor of the sea and the last one is the most wanted criminal 😂😂😂
Rocks D. Xebec: "Damn it, are Garp's genes really that strong?" - Daoist9710763mthbình luậnCh 23 Signs
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😂😂
There was also the VIP card; did the staff consider him too good, so they gave it to him? - Daoist9710763mthbình luận
nothing beats my moms's cooking.
Men were better at cooking than women, Kyomu concluded in his past life, and he was quite skilled in ten different ways of cooking chicken, duck, and fish. - Daoist9710764mthtrả lời LostLegacy
Domain Expansion 😂😂
________ To be continued... ________ - Daoist9710764mthcông bố
- Daoist9710764mthbình luận
though you won't make us wait everyday for chapters? ....
Chapter 5: Disappointed - Daoist9710764mthbình luậnCh 240 The Question Dies When the Human Dreams
- Daoist9710764mthbình luậnThis is the last chapter for the exam. Next one we will have a fight with Netero where he shows his Hatsu and then Sid will create his own Hatsu that will have some similarities to Netero's.