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Youruizzu18dbình luận'his/her' can be shortened to 'their' which is gender neutral and is often used in situations where you don't want to name a singular gender or fear to misgender
"That's less than I expected. But there are two types of slaves, those who are not bound by a slave contract, and those who are bound by a slave contract. I'm sure you all remember the piece of paper that has the slave bound to his/her owner, correct?"- Youruizzu2mthcông bố
One of the best fanfics I've read, worldbuilding is brilliant, character development was done well, romance is very subtle and doesn't interfere with the story and, most importantly in my opinion, the power progression was done excellently. It's definitely one of my favorites right now. Thank you for this great work of art!
- Youruizzu3mthbình luận
Woohoo! New chapter! Thank you
Money and time - Youruizzu3mthtrả lời Youruizzu
This comment was supposed to be on a sentence a bit further...
[The New World, The Ruins of Naufragium Island] - Youruizzu3mthbình luận
revenge -> ravaged?
[The New World, The Ruins of Naufragium Island] - Youruizzu4mthbình luậnCh 7 Chapter 3: Ability Discovered
- Youruizzu4mthbình luận
dungeons -> portals (because Mr J's not a gamer)
"Of course. Anything for Sky. Come, you three. If you are all going back you need to learn some stuff about the dungeons I've been in." - Youruizzu7mthbình luận
fate -> faith*
The fact that the Gods need fate makes it even more so as there will certainly be wars for believers as they are to a certain extent the source of their power. - Youruizzu8mthbình luận
Hatsuhisa Hyuga*
As they return, Fang Mo doesn't forget about Hinata Hatsuhisa, occasionally teaching her some combat skills and sharing food from Steve's backpack. - Youruizzu9mthbình luậnCh 9 T Virus III
- Youruizzu9mthbình luậnCh 6 Zombies
- Youruizzu9mthtrả lời Youruizzu
WN fricked up my comment for some reason, I hope it's readable
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - Youruizzu9mthbình luận
fauna -> flora*fauna = animalsflora = plants
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - Youruizzu9mthbình luận
Lexus -> Cyruz
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - Youruizzu9mthbình luậnCh 5 The Tower (4)
- Youruizzu9mthbình luậnCh 4 The Tower (3)
- Youruizzu10mthbình luận
exploited -> revealed (or uncovered). I think it fits much better here
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - Youruizzu10mthbình luậnCh 7 Escort Mission?!
- Youruizzu10mthbình luậnCh 27 Chapter XVI: Choosing schools and visiting the staff maker