ToujiSouya

Glad to see you updating man been a while

Some people are not seeing the chapters that updated earlier today in their Library

There is a free version of grammarly that would very much help your grammer to make the story more easily read

I would definitely suggest the use of a writing assistant tool such as Grammarly to improve the attention to grammar in this story

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This was a decent book until chapter 69. The problem I have and this goes for a lot of these types of novels, is that they knowledge that would theoretically come in the next 100 years such as him getting the flying car technology. Him having an AI bodyguard that is a living person as well not to mention. I personally do not like that these were added as I feel it ruins a flow of a story heavily and begins to ruin any sort of normality in the world. The writing quality was decent, updates seems to be stable, but the story in later chapter does not match the quality in the earlier ones.

I am very excited to see how this story is going to build up this new character and make connections in a world we have seen few fanfics in this style create. Highly r ecommend

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Hey author, to fix up some of your grammar use the site grammarly it is free to use and will help with punctuation and reword or suggest slight change of the sentence for better understanding.