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See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

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Greetings! I understand that the behaviour of the FMC might’ve been an annoyance, at some point. However, I hope you will be patient enough for her character growth. Thank you very much! <33 Euphemismsofhiatus~

Dear Drsanders, I truly appreciate your comments. I will drop my response to all of your comments for the Capter 1 in this reply. Thus, I will have the chapter one scanned, checked and perhaps revised for improvements. I understand that the scenarios might have been confusing, and so, I will likewise work on that. As for the strange words such as ‘sire’ and ’quacks’, I might have been too carried away and baffled of which literature I was supposed to use — which should’ve been the American Lit rather than British Lit. Reason, why it must have turned out confusing and figurative in language. (I will be sure to work on that as well ^^) As for the grammar, there’s no denying that errors are visible. Hence, will work on that. I will have it all checked and improved (^^) You have my thanks, for your thoughtful comments and suggestions sure are boosting my will to improve this story into a better one. I hope you will continue to look forward to the upcoming chapters! <33 Euphemismsofhiatus

Greetings! Thank you for the input. It is mainly because I spelled it in British literature. However, I would love to have it checked as soon as I can ^^ <33

Greetings! Thank you so much for the comment! I have just updated a revised version of the Prologue. (I’ve altered some scenarios and dialogues, kindly check it out!) Also, I greatly apprehend your confusion. Pardon me for I was at fault — made errors with the names and suchlike. Please look forward for the upcoming chapters, for your queries shall be answered then. <33 Euphemismsofhiatus

Note: I am impenitently rating my own work. I would love to think that this piece of mine is brilliant but of course it needs quite a lot of improvements. To the wonderful readers: I’d love to know your perspectives about this book! Your thoughts would be much appreciated <33

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None much would come to my mind in accord to this piece — purely, it’s fantastic!

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This is elite! Wonderfully elaborated scenarios and creatively manipulated dialogues.., this piece surely is a top-shelf! <33

Wow. Am I truly bound to be speechless with this classic-masterwork? Dear Author, I seriously admire your use of words. It’s elite and rather wise! I am looking forward for the updates. Hats off to you, and way to go! <33

I’ll rate this as a five, for I firmly see this purely interesting. I mean… there’s just so much to anticipate for. Way to go! <33

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This is an absolute masterpiece! I would love to read more of it! ^^ Can’t wait for the next events that might happen. <33

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola

See this! I just gifted the story: Ice cola