SleepyMaker
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SleepyMaker1mthbình luậnCh 17 The Choices- SleepyMaker4mthbình luậnCh 22 22...
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- SleepyMaker7mthtrả lời Ramuda_Amemura
I could work with that. maybe a bit more bulky like a calthetics person
Sách này đã bị xóa - SleepyMaker7mthbình luận
giga chad
A man with a tall body and handsome features, resembling an ancient Greek sculpture, stood there with one hand behind his back, extending his hand to catch the recorder. - SleepyMaker9mthtrả lời The_Heaven
at that point, forget about his family. He should marry him instead
With his new appearance, anyone who laid their gaze on him would've scan his entire figure immediately. It wasn't surprising, considering his figure that has been enhanced be [Divine Physique] was a pinnacle and the true embodiment of masculine beauty. It wasn't something anyone could easily ignore. - SleepyMaker9mthbình luậnCh 4 A Relaxing Morning (R18+)
- SleepyMaker9mthtrả lời Saint_Hubris
- SleepyMaker9mthtrả lời Saint_Hubris
- SleepyMaker9mthcông bố
Tho writing quality isn't all that bad. Just needs some improvement. I suggest you use ai to check for spelling and grammatical mistakes to improve your work. and not write the story. If u for example put in your paragraph and it changes and tweaks it add improvements you'd think help and when u feel satisfied with the outcome I guess post it
- SleepyMaker9mthbình luận
don't give him bs lean swimmer body physique please. Bakis build would be nice
Sách này đã bị xóa - SleepyMaker9mthtrả lời Jackoftrades
let the mc hit
[Image of Yumi] - SleepyMaker10mthtrả lời Athrium
- SleepyMaker10mthtrả lời iLhamzki
not in particular. You only needed to add the compatibility the using 2 weapons have. e.g. A galdius and a shield. Or guns. Cuz in general 2 weapons of the same length wouldn't be a good match when swinging and would get in the way. (prob not daggers) (even tho daggers shouldn't be used for fighting and more for assassination or throwing) Ofc just saying. But this is a fantasy story so who am i to say anything.
'My luck rank should be at A-rank at this point…' - SleepyMaker10mthtrả lời Morg535
guess just imagine the nano machine training but in a room I guess? But the room prob uses some kind of faceless attacker
Back at home, Renault went directly to the basement and started today's training. He obtained this training room by lottery through the system before. Besides daily training, there were also various battle stages. Every time he passed a level, he would receive a reward. However, Renault had only passed the first level so far, and he had not succeeded in the second level yet.