Red_Roman

Honestly, I wanted to extend the fight quite a bit. But it still ended up being either super contrived or too repetitive.

Yeah it would've😆

Why risk it?

This guy needs a therapist. And Bruce is absolutely correct with his decision to bail.

Hueco Mundo is practically an endless world with billions upon billions of Hollows...I'm actually shocked there were so little cannon Vasto Lordes, even with the tough conditions to become one.

Realistically, I can see the ability having a less sensitive passive mode and a much more sensitive active mode.

I'm not sure the process will benefit him. In the cannon it's implied that the Visored are stronger than their pre-hollowfied selves (and the average Captains), but every showing they've had proved otherwise.

I appreciate the feedback. Your right about this being practice for an original novel. Setting this story up in the Bleach universe makes so that I really can't see this story being more than 200 chapters. As I mentioned before, I'll try to find a comprise between the two styles so that I can get in the practice while still giving Riku the journey he deserves.

Thanks, I missed that.

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