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I appreciate the openness to feedback. Keep up good work.

I like the premise and the idea of a supreme gods reincarnation. I love overpowered characters, but I also love the build up to that power. You also haven't included his status screen in quite a while or quests from the system. Other than that I do enjoy the book. I'm just having trouble keeping everything in order.

The story shows promise, but the linearity of the story is confusing. Characters are introduced and then forgotten quickly. The story itself is confusing and bounces around constantly, especially with the time skips and changes development. Like what happened with his sister or Emerald? why did they just stop being mentioned? What about the rest of his family? Who the hell is Xavier, and why did he get a single mention in a chapter and then never get explained? The story has promised, but it seems like it's steam rolling forward with no linear progression or sense.

I came for the truck-kun comments. I was not disappointed

So... I was really enjoying the book and I loved the story and how it was progressing.....but then after the grand entrance he was making to the academy the story just completely changed. No explanation or anything. It's like I'm reading an entirely different book. His personality changed and there isn't even a mention of his wives or what the hell is going on. I'm really disappointed bc up until now the story was great.

he's in SOOOOO much trouble

Victor's coming for a visit....progenitor against rudy?