ok... im going

there will be no gate

yes...

ohhhhh Good idea, I'm going to do it !

thanks !!

you can ahah, the film is waaaaawww

Your sister has good taste then. I'd also advise you to go and see it

No, he's already been part of it for some time (at least a few months, I suppose). Why? If you have any doubts about the chronology, don't hesitate to tell me, I can still correct the next few chapters.

thank u to read bro

I'm still hesitating, so if you have any ideas, don't hesitate to let me know!

thank ! i like ur story bro

I'm thinking about who to choose if I'm going to do a romance, so thanks for the idea, maybe.

THANK YOU! I'm very happy to receive a compliment, especially on this chapter, which I thought was very important.

Exactly, that's one of the ways I work. Firstly, I write the chapter, then I correct it, and then I use chatgpt to correct my text and if, and only if, it's less than 1000 words when I've finished, I ask it to enlarge it a bit. But now, when I re-read it, I find it cringe ahahahah

it happens ahah

shadow slave ? Thank you so much for your comment, it's really very constructive! I'm a beginner, so the pov's are complicated Ig, but I think it's so enriching to do them, so I'll try to improve, thank you. And as for the chapters, I'm going to try and make them longer (around 1,500 words, I think).

something like that, but with fire

true, thank !

No, he'll have to make his own army, the weapons are just cool objects that I wanted to add. Then, for his first shadow, I think in 2 or 3 chapters maximum.

When I see your comments and those of others, I'm starting to doubt myself and believe what you're saying, even if I'm still convinced about my idea. And yes, I can't wait to see how powerful an admiral really is!