wlitsch

if Jay joins the CIA and American military I'm dropping this novel and leaving a dozen bad reviews. that's just too rotten. Jay is already a slave to his family. that's tolerable. slave to a nefarious power. not so much.

MJ's digital auto digital forensics is too over powered and unrealistic. so is his immaterial/material ice crem cone existence.

this Earth arc is steadily ruining the story. it's been a chore ever since he got back. tell, siblings, make to do list, give away treasure to ingrates, deal with cutesy baby that is physical and not physical simultaneously, add grandpa to list of beings who will steal treasure from him in the future. wonderful! or not.

i don't know why new authors don't understand how a good party is made. a good party is where everyone contributes equally. it is not where one heroic member is constantly sacrificing his growth or strength to support the weaklings, who behave like parasites: taking all giving nothing. watching an MC sacrifice their strength for family, party, or friends is not fun.

another plot hole. how do you ruffle the hair of a soul baby. if it's physical it can die or get hurt. also, how would it enter a computer. it wouldn't.

the different POV in this chapter was awkward. thanks for the chapter though. at least he didn't kill in a wishy washy way or cry about it. I'm thankful for that at least.

how is it that his sibling van see his silly little soul baby. that's either a mistake or it should be.

I'm even more disappointed in this "cute" AI then before. it's useless. all it does is annoyingly restate what he already knew and do what he was already going to do to manage his stats. what do we need a floating baby for? ughhh!

i could do without a "cute" baby shaped AI. how totally unnecessary. does it need a body at all? three inky good thing about it is now we don't have to worry about any cute pets showing up to get tamed. thankfully that means no baby dragons on the horizon.

well, I enjoyed the burning hair phenomenon.