What are you looking at? Go back to where you came from, donkey!
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Author, I really like that you actually do your research on the SS story. An advice that I keep giving to SS authors is that don't be afraid to change things in the story. For example, maybe in this story, Caster won't die, and he has to come to terms with his failed mission when he gets back to his family (I always felt that he has more potential than some major characters in the story). Another piece of piece of advice I can give you is that during each major arc ending of SS, there are always big things happening that will catapult into the next arc and also the consequences of making a choice whether good or bad. I hope you do something similar. For example, maybe something happened, and the monsters that live in America suddenly start going to other continents and start attacking humans there, further making people feel hopeless at their circumstances.
Please do. MC and Spidey will get along very well.
We need Spidey for these types of chapters.
If I was Muzan, after the fight is over, I'd use the transporting demon, gather all Upper Moons, trap one Hashira at a time, and then gang up on that person JJK style.
You've clearly never watched Blue Lock. People from time and time again has been dissing on Japanese Football and there's even more in the manga.
This is definitely your best chapter yet. I was definitely skeptical at first because thus far, most of the things that happened are pretty much like in the OG novel and when those types of authors try to add originality to it, that's when you'll notice the quality of the story goes extremely downhill. This chapter really intrigued me. Hopefully, it only goes up from this point on.