ZinonWonder

See this! I just gifted the story: Dragon

See this! I just gifted the story: Magic castle

dude, he already knew xiao ming will have the manual after the banquet, and he also knew how he got it - from the library. and that's what he was trying to prevent, but it turns out it was already too late, and his info was also wrong. why was it wrong? that's related to future plot ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

how is that a plot hole? it's called realistic plot. ye tian yun just knows that the manual is there, he doesn't know the full story. go and understand what a plot hole really is before you come complaining here in review section. and if you were expecting mc to get everything handed to him with zero to nil effort, you're welcome to not read this anymore.

though pacing has been an issue because this was the first time I am writing a novel, I have worked it on a lot and have improved it in the chapters after the training arc. As for plotholes, tell me any one of them.

tysm!! you made my day (＾∇＾)ﾉ♪

lie*

will increase release speed from sunday.

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