Mandy_Calhoun

Pretty good start. Could use a bit of editing for smoother transitions. The story moves pretty quickly and I feel like I’m missing some background information on the characters. It could be brought in later chapters to make the story more well rounded. Other than that, keep up the good work author. This story has a lot of potential.

Pretty good read so far. I was hooked from the very first chapter. The characters surely bring this story to life in a very relatable comedic way. Can’t wait to read more.

Intriguing start. I feel like it’s one of those stories that you have to pay attention to context clues because of the suspense and mystery surrounding the characters backgrounds. Can’t wait to read what happens next.

Interesting so far. There is a lot going on within the first couple of chapters. It will be interesting to see where the story goes next.

Pretty good read so far. The drama from chapter 1 until chapter 5 is pretty intense. Looking forward to seeing what happens in the upcoming chapters.

Truth be told, I wasn’t expecting that! Really great start and very refreshing. First time reader of this author and wow. I can’t wait to see what happens next. Keep up that great job author ❤️

Interesting start. Story moves pretty quickly in the 7 chapters written so far. There are a lot of moving pieces, drama and schemes going on but the story has potential to be really good.

Pretty good read so far. Love the dynamic between the kids and the adults. Makes the story even more entertaining. Can’t wait to see what happens next.

Missing this story 🥺 Hope everything is ok Jax ❤️

This is going to be good 👀🍿