Miki_Marlo75

Meh

What can I say, a SAO fanfic is rare to find one these days but we have to wait to see how it develops until it goes well, the plot is entertaining. He's not the typical lonely emo or one with a hero complex who will save everyone.

So far it's a good read. The MC doesn't let himself be trampled on from the beginning and you can see that he's willing to do whatever he has to do to achieve his goal.

Je el mc became a muscle brain

It's typical that they say something and then contradict themselves, which is very common in stories today.

The story leaves much to be desired. It starts very suddenly. They kidnap him, threaten him, force him, all without his consent. They leave him the only way out: to die and convert, they convert him and he feels nothing. Seriously, a little bit of hate or resentment but he lets it pass as if nothing and then becomes friends with someone from one moment to the next without further ado.

No offense, the plot is horrible.

In my opinion and taste, this story is dead in more than one sense. Create a character and look for everything so that he doesn't advance. Then making a character to show that the main character is nothing with the excuse of experience and wisdom leaves much to be desired. In order to show that the character is not perfect in my opinion you are forcing him from a long time ago almost from the beginning

The mistake was launching the arc without context and ruining or disorienting readers who liked how the story was going at the beginning if you continue with the option of following the arc you have to speed it up Bad reviews will continue to come from people who don't understand it.

Okey and the chapter