Daichi_TBR193
Random person that likes fanfics. And is writing stories with his phone 📱... for now. Let’s chat: https://discord.gg/QtBrjZD .
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Thanks ☺️ I really appreciate your kind words. But I still think I can do better. Perhaps include more POVs and battle scenes. 🤔 What do you think? Is there any segment in particular you thought I should expand that felt weak in the early chapters?
Thanks for the review! 😁 It’s really appreciated. As for your question, I do intend to continue with this story, but having recently read it I’m certain that it deserves some rewriting. Main problem is that I’m having trouble organizing my schedule to write it. 😅 Would you mind telling me what exactly have you enjoyed about my story as it is? I’m asking just to make sure I won’t change the most popular aspects of my early chapters. ☺️
¡Saludos! No hay ningún problema, simplemente me alegro de tenerte de vuelta. Realmente espero que todo esté bien contigo. ☺️ ¿Te importaría compartir el nombre de ese cómic? Tienes mi curiosidad. 😁 En cuanto a tu pregunta, no me importa dejarles saber a mis lectores cómo va mi trabajo, honestamente he avanzado bastante en mi próximo capítulo, aunque no puedo prometer ninguna actualización porque mañana es el día de la madre, veré qué podere hacer. 😉
¡Saludos! No hay ningún problema, simplemente me alegro de tenerte de vuelta. Realmente espero que todo esté bien contigo. ☺️ ¿Te importaría compartir el nombre de ese cómic? Tienes mi curiosidad. 😁 En cuanto a tu pregunta, no me importa dejarles saber a mis lectores cómo va mi trabajo, honestamente he avanzado bastante en mi próximo capítulo, aunque no puedo prometer ninguna actualización porque mañana es el día de la madre, veré qué podere hacer. 😉
I’m sort of retconning the Plumbers as mainly a human organization, kinda like the Forever Knights though more with a USA theme, meanwhile I’m planning to leave the intergalactic police force part of it for the Galactic Enforcers. 🤔 Remember those guys? The show certainly seemed to have forgotten about them several times. 😅 If I ever introduce Rook, he will come from this organization.
I’ve been working on improving the system mechanics and clearing the still remaining info dumps segments, so it’s most likely that I will have a rewrite from the first chapter before updating this last one 😁 The story will remain mostly the same, I just might improve on the side character’s interactions with the MC.
Attea the frog princess and Looma the warrior princess won’t change all that much in terms of their characters, but I will give more focus on my narrative to both their Incursean empire and Tetramand clan politics/warfare. 🤔 I mean, before the end of classic series the galaxy will become well aware that the Wielder of the Omnitrix lives on planet Earth. 😁 So Earth will start to grow into a more relevant figure amongst the ruling powers, expect more diplomatic engagement and perhaps some displays of power. I plan to give some introduction to Looma’s rulership right from Tini, the female Tetramand that appeared on that episode with the Galactic Enforcers. 😉
Yeah, from his birth to many decades after his conquest. I also plan to give some focus to his sisters. 🤔 I’m mainly interested in writing this fic similar to my other ASOIAF fic (with a gaming system). Though I’m still working on ways to make the character leveling up less convoluted than my first attempts. 😁