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Daichi_TBR193

Daichi_TBR193

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Random person that likes fanfics. And is writing stories with his phone 📱... for now. Let’s chat: https://discord.gg/QtBrjZD .

2019-10-24 đã tham giaGlobal
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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19310h
    trả lời SOMMO_ARCANO

    Thanks ☺️ I really appreciate your kind words. But I still think I can do better. Perhaps include more POVs and battle scenes. 🤔 What do you think? Is there any segment in particular you thought I should expand that felt weak in the early chapters?

    Ch 26 End of book one
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    Daichi_TBR1931d
    trả lời Pedro_Padre

    I hadn’t considered it up till now 😁 who knows? Once I get to focus once again on this fic I might find a way to make such “cameos” happen naturally through the narrative.

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR1932d
    trả lời Master_Steve

    No problem at all 😉 I’m always happy to speak with my readers. 😁

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR1932d
    trả lời Master_Steve

    Don’t worry, I’m totally continuing this story. 😁 Personally I think that I’m more than halfway through with the next chapter, it’s just the minor details and beta reading that always gets me. 😅

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR1934d
    trả lời Seyitan_Odufalu

    Hello! 😁 Thanks for the review. I’m currently working on the next chapter of this fic, it’s just taking a while to organize myself to write faster. 😅 After I post the next chapter I plan to switch to another fic of mine, but I don’t plan to drop this or any other of my fics.

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR1937d
    trả lời Pedro_Padre

    Thanks for the review! 😁 It’s really appreciated. As for your question, I do intend to continue with this story, but having recently read it I’m certain that it deserves some rewriting. Main problem is that I’m having trouble organizing my schedule to write it. 😅 Would you mind telling me what exactly have you enjoyed about my story as it is? I’m asking just to make sure I won’t change the most popular aspects of my early chapters. ☺️

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19310d
    trả lời SOMMO_ARCANO

    I believe I will have to make some rewrites first before moving on with the next chapter 😅 I’ve recently read again this fic and was a little embarrassed by how awkward my writing was in some parts.

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19316d
    trả lời Abdullah_Alghamdi_9810

    Why? 😅 Not sure I follow.

    Ch 21 Pieces in a Pai Sho board
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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19316d
    trả lời Abdullah_Alghamdi_9810

    😅😁😉

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19317d
    trả lời Sebastian_Alarcon_4836

    ¡Gracias! ¡A ti también! 😉👍

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19318d
    trả lời Ulises_Acevedo

    Glad to hear that you enjoyed my idea. 😁 As for your question, honestly, I don’t plan to include it other than having the MC make some meta jokes and references about it 🤔😁

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19318d
    trả lời Sebastian_Alarcon_4836

    ¡Saludos! No hay ningún problema, simplemente me alegro de tenerte de vuelta. Realmente espero que todo esté bien contigo. ☺️ ¿Te importaría compartir el nombre de ese cómic? Tienes mi curiosidad. 😁 En cuanto a tu pregunta, no me importa dejarles saber a mis lectores cómo va mi trabajo, honestamente he avanzado bastante en mi próximo capítulo, aunque no puedo prometer ninguna actualización porque mañana es el día de la madre, veré qué podere hacer. 😉

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19318d
    trả lời Sebastian_Alarcon_4836

    ¡Saludos! No hay ningún problema, simplemente me alegro de tenerte de vuelta. Realmente espero que todo esté bien contigo. ☺️ ¿Te importaría compartir el nombre de ese cómic? Tienes mi curiosidad. 😁 En cuanto a tu pregunta, no me importa dejarles saber a mis lectores cómo va mi trabajo, honestamente he avanzado bastante en mi próximo capítulo, aunque no puedo prometer ninguna actualización porque mañana es el día de la madre, veré qué podere hacer. 😉

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19318d
    trả lời Ulises_Acevedo

    I’m sort of retconning the Plumbers as mainly a human organization, kinda like the Forever Knights though more with a USA theme, meanwhile I’m planning to leave the intergalactic police force part of it for the Galactic Enforcers. 🤔 Remember those guys? The show certainly seemed to have forgotten about them several times. 😅 If I ever introduce Rook, he will come from this organization.

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19320d
    trả lời Son_Gohan_6065

    I’ve been working on improving the system mechanics and clearing the still remaining info dumps segments, so it’s most likely that I will have a rewrite from the first chapter before updating this last one 😁 The story will remain mostly the same, I just might improve on the side character’s interactions with the MC.

    Ch 25 WORK IN PROGRESS*** Make a Legionnaire out of a peasant and prepare for war
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    Daichi_TBR19320d
    trả lời Master_Steve

    Attea the frog princess and Looma the warrior princess won’t change all that much in terms of their characters, but I will give more focus on my narrative to both their Incursean empire and Tetramand clan politics/warfare. 🤔 I mean, before the end of classic series the galaxy will become well aware that the Wielder of the Omnitrix lives on planet Earth. 😁 So Earth will start to grow into a more relevant figure amongst the ruling powers, expect more diplomatic engagement and perhaps some displays of power. I plan to give some introduction to Looma’s rulership right from Tini, the female Tetramand that appeared on that episode with the Galactic Enforcers. 😉

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR19321d
    trả lời Master_Steve

    Still on working 🤔 yesterday I believe I regained some momentum with writing this next chapter. 😁 Any questions in particular? I mean, besides the exact date of when it will be updated. 😅

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR1931mth
    trả lời GAME_PLAYER

    Wow! I’m really thankful for the review 😁 As for the next update, I’m sorry as always for the inconvenient delay and will try my best have it updated as soon as possible. Hopefully, though I certainly can’t promise anything, I will manage to do so within this week. ☺️

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR1931mth
    trả lời VenerableDemon

    I got you 😉

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  • Daichi_TBR193
    Daichi_TBR1931mth
    trả lời VenerableDemon

    Yeah, from his birth to many decades after his conquest. I also plan to give some focus to his sisters. 🤔 I’m mainly interested in writing this fic similar to my other ASOIAF fic (with a gaming system). Though I’m still working on ways to make the character leveling up less convoluted than my first attempts. 😁

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