airmaster123

This is a fantastic story with some flaws. It has something I enjoy a character that's does what he wants when he wants. But the flaws I cannot picture him in my mind and I notice some Korean tendencies. I feel this story has immense potential.

Nice work my dude.keep it up your killing it !!

You ok man. You have been silent for a few days.

Welcome back!

You ok man. You have been quiet for a few days. If you need a break take it dude and enjoy your vacation.

i subscribed to your channel ill post my comment soon look for phil

This made me laugh

I can't wait to read more

I would pay

so is this story dead