i subscribed to your channel ill post my comment soon look for phil

This made me laugh

I can't wait to read more

I would pay

so is this story dead

nice i like the demonstration

yes i would pay for more chapters

they are in my prayers

professor

this made me laugh

i feel like read this awhile ago. i don't remember where but it seems very familiar.

i hope they win just to spite seido for not making him the number one.

dbza ftw

i tried to find your youtube "can usa" but i found nothing can you maybe give us a video we an find for reference

dragonball no system do that and we are golden

i feel like i have read this chapter somewhere before. ok found it hp: eagle soars. but i still like the story so im not gonna do anything about it.

i cant love this the main character gecko moria has been in the first 5 chapters called "her, maria" and a few others. if that was not bad enough there are chinese names all over the place. you might think thats not so bad. THEY CANT EVEN GET 5 LETTERS RIGHT HOW THE F*** DO THE EXPECT TO GET CHINESE NAMES RIGHT. i could have forgiven it all of it if they where consistent with the names. but the literal first chapter is so confusing i am under the impression that a woman named maria isekaied into gecko moria after losing to kaido and has been whipped by a man named whatever for 3 years even after swearing to whatever to join kaido before breaking out. i am not even sure if thats right i had to piece this together. i shouldnt play jigsaw to enjoy a story if cant type MORIA dont right names you'll confuse everybody including yourself. im no expert this should be obvious but my final score is me being generous writing 1 star: youknow why stability of updates 4 star: this is me being kind to give you a higher score story development 3 stars: i have no idea whats going on but i get a small jist of it character design 4 stars: i like gecko morias design thats it world background 4 stars: you are playing in odas sandbox you got plenty of background noise

welcome back my dude!!!!! this was a fun chapter i liked it alot.

this is a great start and the first i think i have read on this type of power. i am extremely interested to see where it is going. i am favoriting this story and hoping for the best