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Kudos…but with a lot of ‘whys’ I barely did anything

No way you read it all again…. did you?

No problem, sorry I couldn’t read yours more…. time is literally sand rn

spewing* the white crystals….and piling* (almost like a compound verb after “by”) Or spewing* the white crystals from the grey cloudy sky, which* piled up

those spoke* of white* rather than “those were speak for white”

What I enjoyed about this side story is that the author decided to give a small treat of another story rather than making Tang Muxin have an epiphany and write…

Author, you don’t even know how much I’ve grown attached to your characters…. Thank you for the happy ending! This is my favorite arc so far

Not gonna lie, Kain is acting rather humble here. Does he respect Damien already?

Because behind that hideous figure lied a past that formed the current creature and a memory it wished to never disclose.* This is what I think you meant to say, and the reason for no comma is because you can reverse the latter part with the beginning. Ex) A past that formed the current creature and a memory it wished to never disclose lied behind that hideous figure.

Doing alright, still drowning in studies