Rafael_Loki

Harem is always more interesting since it opens a lot of interaction options for the mc.Despise the non-harem cry, some of the best novels here are harem.It's always amusing to see the interaction of the wife's with different personalities and goals.

It's a medieval world wo modern medicine. It could be called a disease and it would be right since they are limited by their scientific progress.

No

Cringe and out of character. It would be better if the old man was a little more mean to test mc mettle.He went all "I'm alfa and omega" for no freaking reason. lol

Why the f the program broke all paragraphs and grouped it.

The writing style is to frustrating to me. I can't even focus in the history. The author has too many amateur vices like the use of "..." and start all sentences with "He did x", "He saw y".History segment's crash with each other. There is no transition and everything is very descriptive without care for the text elegance. As general rule "x" is spoken dialogues, [x] is system or notification and 'x' is used for internal dialogue. There is no need to Express "he said" all the time when it will just brake the text.The review is not to discourage. I can see author is pretty new to it, but I think it's best to use this novel as a learning base so in the future you can make a more compelling history. PS: There are some calligraphy and styling sites to help fix text.PS2: My English comes from playing RPGs as a kid so I don't think it's particularly good.

Wait... he don't think for a second he will be stabbed and left to rot there? I hope to see his personality improve somehow. He's far too childish and simple minded for my taste.Come on, show us your old man wisdom. You are not even an isekai teenager.

what useless chapter, just to show a old mercenary with a brain smaller than a kid.

MC is pain in the ass. After 8 chapters I can't handle this plot. It's the same old formula, but the system just explains about everything. MC 23:59 - It's a new free life and I don't need to hate the manipuled heroines. MC 00:00 - I'm vengeance. I'll take everything and treat them as prostitutes. And fuck you system that gave me freedom.

Lux... he stinks with harem aura. Well, I just hope to see Zio with a strong pair, not some damsel in distress.