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reaper_grim2yrbình luậnbottle out of his backpack*
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her face how I've seen you use he and she correctly then suddenly just not '-' I'm glad I looked all the way to the last chapter to see you changed but it's no excuse to leave the very first few chapters like this man
Kenichi looked at Miu waiting for her response but he didn't got any as she was blushing so hard that anyone would think that it's the result of red paint being splashed on his face. Niijima who looked at this scene from the sidelines knew that they were forgetting about the main topic for which he came here for. - reaper_grim2yrbình luận
weights*
Kenichi has started his middle school life, he was 13 years old right now his training has also increased he had started wearing ankel waits since 3 years ago which was 5 kg at each ankle and have increased to 25 kg at each ankle now. Even his energy control has increased he is able to coat any part of his body with energy whenever he wants ofcourse he haven't used it as he didn't fought with someone who forced him to use it. - reaper_grim2yrbình luận
here*
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Yoooo I actually am looking forward for future chapters it's not bad, but grammar needs sum work other than that I like what's happening
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are the same*
“It’s been 400 years but the trees are same, huh.” - reaper_grim3yrbình luậnCh 146 Construction
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get rid of at
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in their party
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The most important thing
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Right now, all my peers are already
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but, for some reason
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This monster is only level 1.
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haven't read anything yet, but reading the review ting made me very interested mainly be she's I myself write a bit and I can see the grammar errors already. So I'll do you a favor and basically go through you're story and do the highlight thing with sentences and point out what should be spelled like what and what words should be used or placed seeing you also forget to put words that are needed :3 I also am leaving a 3 star mainly for the generic world background with monsters, and the mc family member is sick background, but I will not put anything about being weak and that it's a choice for that bit.
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W-Wha bruh you don't have koneko or Akeno!! rjenzjsjjsjsjsnejdhejsjsksksk bruh he'd at least bring koneko and Akeno, especially Koneko seeing the two gree up together basically, plus he went through the trouble with Akeno so I'd at least think he'd bring her as well it don't feel right not bringing them two
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