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love it love everything about it the writing style love it the character building love it the duel scenes are by far my favorite thing about this but a close second is the mc everyone loves a renegade hero type with a sense of morality and fear that of a nirmal humans and yet it doesn't stop him from acting and growing love this story will recommend 10 out of 10 times

looking forward to it and good luck with school type endeavors

over all a very good story in depth on world background and great story so far love the mc and his pokemons personalities and so far like gregory hope that ur not ganna end up dropping cuz im adding this story to my library looking forward to the end of your hiatus

urs or not thnx for the great story must say love it

i love this story so far the writing is great the grammar is above average the world back round is awesome and the characters are portrayed properley hope author-san doesn't drop and am adding to my library also lil tip harrys grand mother is a black she is serius's grandfathers sister so related through harrys fathers mother the only reason draco was next in line after serius in the book is because the black family is a because his mothers a black so hes half not just a quarter like harry

Thnx for the chapter love it

Loooooove this only critique I have is I want more uploads xD anyway keep up the amazing job Author-san. Ima add it to my library lovin it cant wait to see were you go with it and how far

I have a question can he become a were wolf cuz ik he can't use magic btw love that concept being op magic warrior so over done lol but can he become a lycan is my question and if yes how will the nanobots in his body affect that anyway love the story keep it up author-san

What about 16 just curious

Get well soon Author-san

Love it love it all hope you dont drop any time soon and cant wait to see how this adventure turns out. Also you. Almost never see a ben 10 fan fic so ya its just a huge bonus that its a dope as s*** fan fic as well anyway great story thnx Author-san