kazuma123

it's so hard to find a novel with good grammar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i just think it needs a editor or the person who put it up to reread it and correct some things and some things are stupid and others make no sense

It's not bad, some things are not as good as i thought it would be but altogether it's not half bad. It does needs someone to proofread though and change some things but besides that its pretty good.

it's a pretty good book it could have been a little better but so far not bad.... .......................................................................

it needs the auther to reread and edit it...................................................................... .......................................

it was way bad before 700 chapters already

It's not bad at the beginning but it turns into trash in the middle................... ................................................................

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I don't understand this part, there is bad grammar in this entire thing!

Great story, just needs a little better grammar........................................................ ...............................................................