ah good. the chinese fics tend to either be a sexual or blow their load at merely seeing a woman.

its already ended, you got the enemy king you morons.

does the master at arms have a valyrian sword too? otherwise why does his sword survive the clash? or do you mean a parry?

you fighting against chatgpt protocols here or something? its the typical bs lets hold hands and skippy off into the the sunset together kind of stuff you keep getting.

Ned is a wokey

please open a freaking map. you are suggesting you sail from white harbour, around the entire continent, past the iron isles and their ironborn, to seaguard.... why yould you travel the circumference of a continent, pass by your enemy to group up for something thats about the same distance from moat cailin to winterfell.... this is such random bs...

more like you arive in a few months near half a year time, to the aftermath of the war to sight see

imagine the United States. white harbour is in florida..... your ironborn are in L.A. white harbour is an eastern port on the east side of the continent.... the iron isles with the ironborn are om the western side of the continent... its like taking a boat from NYC to Hawaii....pre panama canal. its possible but absolutely rediculous

time to scissor tonight

you do realise that most forms of crop rotation are from BC in our own world right? 3 crop rotation is before the medieval era, its only 4 crop rotation that became a thing later late 1600s. might as well just introduce fertiliser. theres bio forms of it too. that said, growing food countrary to popular belief isnt only done in large fields or greenhouses. with the medieval setup, and the problems.you face with frozen ground, you might want to look into top soil gardening and homesteading instead.

you can blame the fanfiction thropes since 2006 for that. thats what generally happens in fanfics with this build up.

ive read this before, is this a translation? if so its already on wn and much further ahead.

the manga also starts with naruto, so kakashi would be in his 20s. not an age where hed play outside. which he wasnt prone to doing even when his dad was alive. his dad tended to drag him to playgrounds to make him socialise, against his own interest. so the whole kakashi being out there playing angle makes it seem like this is going to be a yaoi fanfic and you are going to go boku no piko with kakashi... it might cost you some readers because this chapter shows your cannon facts are ignored in favour of buddying up to kid kakashi like this, which usually is the simp angle people use to groom kid naruko and the like in naruto fics... im just pointing it out so you know the impression this chapter gives.

and just like that its no longer sparring...

hes waiting for when he gets to make out with naruto

like 49% of all naruto fanfics is a sasuke fanfic, the other 49% a naruto insert, with the remaining 2% alternative options. not really a weird choice that that if someone get send to another universe, by whatever something, they end up as the popular option

Whilst the premise is cool, the fact that basically the first 10 or so chapters are of a preschooler / preteen pretty much doing the usual get strong kick ass as a hero and build a financial empire up stuff just doesnt work for me. I graded this on wn criteria not my like or dislike of it. but yeah. I went from excited to wondering if the entire story is going to be kiddy on a powerwank bs. Im not gonna lie, this is like those naruto fics where at the age of six naruto or sasuke already has sage mode and ems or sage eyes, and are already the hokage.... the kind of fic where before anything truly happens that could have challenged them, that theyre so overpowered, talked up and in control of everything that it takes reality changing plot twists to make failure even remotely as a possibility. where is the excitement, when at 6 years old the mc is already viewed as a ready to go quality agent by Shield and so forth.... I mean common!?

I thought she was a telepath? not a telekinetic?

awww just in their hearts?