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I read up to chapter 189 and I couldn't follow the story anymore, it's not bad, but it's not good either, the MC becomes very op without much explanation, there are a lot of gaps in the script that make everything much worse, and that's my opinion (SORRY FOR THE GRAMMATICAL ERRORS, I'M USING GOOGLE TO TRANSLATE)

Thanks for clarifying (I don't speak English so sorry if I have an error in English)[img=recommend]

historia muito bem escrita até para mim que é do brasil, o desenvolvimento esta sendo maravilhoso e eu espero por um novo capitulo ansiosamente todo o dia[img = moedas]

fanfic maravilhosa [img = moedas]

gostei muito da historia