Quake_Midaro

I'm just gonna hop of this fic here good luck with continuong it but since the solidification of Dune being more or less just another Poke Smut Villain I've grown bored with this fic it's lost intrigue or interest and the constant stints of Smut tha lack of progress the destruction of Helen's personailty sicne the start Gardeviors hoity toity obnoxiousness etc... its honestly getting boring ever since the star of the fall of TR each chapter has just been even worse in quality goodluck and hope you do well but nah the fic has grown to be more obnoxious to read than interesting it's like you've given up on being interesting or consistent angain goodluck but this fic just ain't worth the read anymore imo

Honestly this personailty is meh at best atm way too hung up on Justice starting to sound like a retelling of the "For the Greater Good" kind of statements feels way too off putting for Piccolo even as a reincarnation MC

Daima retconned that...

Ya know I got a feeling this clip is what inspired this fic somewhat

Dragons do like their hoards and females often capture treasure to gain their mates favor so this is lore accruate Harem building

A nearly 2 month old comment and you reply to it.... I'm sorry your so lonely but bro grass and fresh air are free and differing opinions are as well

RIP Translations

No just no inconsistency with a MC's actions and personality just feel awkward and uncomfortable this chapter felt like a completely different fic got to be honest if that trope is going to be the norm i'm just gonna skip out it's offputting good grammer decent smut but between the carbon copy Gojo choice for looks and the changing personality I just can't bring any interest for the fic goodluck but I'm out

Guardians Require a Ghost to respawn Takia wiuld have the abilities not the gear that comes with thst universe