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first off as a brother of 5 sisters, I can safely say that girls do start thinking of stuff like this early (under 20 years old). In a world like naruto I wouldn't be surprised if they started even earlier as the general life expectancy is roughly the same as industrial revolution based on my understanding.
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First off, I want to thank you for this story. It is one of the best ideas I have come across so far as well as one of the better written ones. Second, I want to request either a double chapter release schedule or possibly a once a week mass release schedule. My reason for this is that I rarely find a truly great story ttha is not a fanfic of another fanfic instead of the base story. In addition, I am a considerable fan of both Gundam 00 and Gundam Seed. Third, I would like to cation you to ignore the haters who will show up if they haven't already. They are nothing more than jealous imbeciles who want to tear down others for nothing more than their own petty envy. Lastly I ask that you finish your story instead of dropping partway through. Even if you are considering a rewrite of it, I ask that you wait to do so until you finish the first version, as this will allow you to have a far easier time on a rewrite if you so choose to do so. Thank you.
Depends on what you plan to include further down, will your mc affect or interact with those from side stories like the bad batch, rebels, or Rouge One, ect. if so then mabe lay some ground work during the clone wars arc. Also mabe flesh out your character some more as well as your kingdom?empire? Your faction, who are your allies, why, all in all you have lots of ways to continue. On a final note, do keep in mind that you put your mc as the highest ranking officer in the republic military second only to the chancellor, meaning the position is more over-all perspective not just one or two key battles, not saying that they can't or won't be in such battles but that they have more on their plate than say the Generals, also unless I'm mistaken I believe the navy higher ups still answers to the senate on some matters. Sorry for the long comments but I enjoy the different approach to the story and want you to continue. Thank you
correction anakin is 9, padme is 14 in the phantom menace
zangetsu wasn't actually ichigo's zanpakto, but his quincy power made manifest, up until he got his true Zangetsu's
Geonosis
keep the chapter's coming, at least until you no longer wish to keep writing, the only opinions that matters is your own
gotta go p90 submachine gun personally, accurate, semi automatic( single shot, burst or full auto if I remember correctly) and fairly durable. Also more advanced than currently available guns but not too much more advanced.
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