RedMonkeyDog

this makes me not want to read any further sigh

the use of (demon) is really going to annoy me lol

his first thought is to go to the church the same ppl that experiment on children bro would have been better off training his ass off why go to the church or anyone else if he can't use magic or anything else that has to do with energy

true but it's also a fanfic lol so it can be changed

is this the same Harry Potter, Squatter By: Enterprise1701-d thats on fanfiction or is dif ?

like it so far it cool he's nine-tails but the emo eyes was a bit much , writing quality is good so i would say read it other then that there's not many chapters to go off of to rate . as for my person pref i hate the over used emo eyes but thats neither here or there .

sigh

yang half was in naruto the yin half was taken with mini-toe if im not wrong

can someone tell me is the mc a dumbass that talks in the 3rd person saying doom every sentence like riser phenix ?