SirZed

....you call this a chapter? Man didn't use paragraphs, wrote in single sentences, skipped a whole like and starts a new sentence...

makes no sense at all

bruh, don't become a discounted Author, use proper grammar

If he goes along with the sham of a marriage contract to Sona, imma be very disappointed

I'm so confused 🤔 I feel like with all her powers, she should be hella powerful, but why does that not seem to be the case?

After Danmachi, could he visit Mass Effect, Destiny, Halo or The Legendary Mechanic?

This part of the story is always the same. no new scenario. kinda wish he'd kill him outright

First I've seen that gif 😂

When he's done wth the WH40K universe, will he remain an Astartes afterwards?

So robotic, you tried making your MC way too complex but ended up writing up someone that the readers can't connect with or enjoy reading about. This was supposed to be a SI/Reincarnation story, at the moment it sure doesn't read that way.