don_offl
Author of Rise of the Legendary Emperor, Hitman with a Badass System & Anti Hero with a Symbiote System. Bringing stories to life and living through my characters.
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don_offl5dtrả lời Michael_HolmbergUpdate: Fixed the chapter and rewrote it completely. Please let me know how the chapter reads now
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Hi, I noticed that but those chapters were written during when i had covid so i messed up pretty bad. But the upcoming chapters have been edited and you can see the difference
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - don_offl1mthtrả lời DaoistFrKgyACh 1240 Noah’s Preparation For The Second Round
- don_offl1mthtrả lời Ash_thirumuruCh 1 Love and Betrayal
- don_offl1mthtrả lời Black_Star_0228
- don_offl6mthtrả lời raonsloanCh 1 The Rise of an Anti Hero
- don_offl6mthtrả lời Dandave
I can understand why you feel like that. And to be honest, i have mentioned in the chapter how Victoria's behaviour surprised Draven. There is a good reason why she attacked him, if you have read Moonblade arc, you might have guessed why
"I don't have time for this. Get out of my way," Draven snapped, his patience waning as the urgency of his mission pressed upon him. - don_offl6mthtrả lời SaendHaelp
- don_offl7mthtrả lời AtlasBreaker
Thank you atlas. I have fixed the mistakes. Thank you again for taking the time to read my book
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - don_offl8mthtrả lời Potatowned
Just give it a go and read a few more chapters...you might want to stick around when he breaks out the prison
Draven tried to communicate with his khal, hoping it was still inside his ear and could help him contact Sarah. However, his fears were confirmed when he realized the soldiers had confiscated his communication device. He was now trapped in the most secure prison in Stegia, powerless and alone. - don_offl8mthtrả lời PotatownedCh 3 Margoth, the Elden God
- don_offl8mthtrả lời faithfull_xfxCh 12 Ghost healing potion
- don_offl8mthtrả lời Wolf_Sage_9311
hello
"They're close" When he peeked at the visuals being captured by the drone, he noticed the crocks getting closer and closer. Although he still looked calm, he was pretty serious about the upcoming battle. - don_offl8mthtrả lời readingaddict89
If you dont interact with your reader, you can never be a better writer imo. that is why i always read all the comments and respond to them as much as i can
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - don_offl8mthtrả lời KazumayagamiCh 1038 What Really Happened? Part Two
- don_offl8mthtrả lời Kazumayagami
you just have to wait 2 chapters, not 300. I wrote long chapters bcz if i wrote short chapters, it will make u spend more coins until the MC appears. that is why i wrote long chapters when the MC is not in the chapter so u can get it over with in one single chapter
Ch 1037 What Really Happened? Part One - don_offl8mthtrả lời readingaddict89
It should have been Noah's plan. Edited it
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - don_offl8mthtrả lời Blackthorn1
lol a funny mistake,it should be Gaya
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - don_offl9mthtrả lời 0megaknight1
it was a mistake. Updated the chapter. Please make sure to read it. Sorry for the mistake
Đoạn này đã bị xóa - don_offl9mthtrả lời readingaddict89
I am glad to hear that. But you are right, i hate making readers pay more coins for repeated things, That is why i always update the chapter first and then add some fillers needed for the chapter so the fillers wont be counted in the final word count. Sometimes adding these things and editing them again would cause a problem.
The air was thick with the acrid scent of smoke and the clash of metal as Azazel singlehandedly took on the Guardian airships. His muscles bulged and rippled under his skin as his strength grew by the minute, fueled by his connection to the Dark Lord. He couldn't help but revel in the feeling of power coursing through his veins, knowing that the Dark Lord was behind it all.