KonaN is my favourite character hopefully you continue this because i would love to read more of this. bbest of lucK and hopefully you continue

Seizures and pain

I use italics but the app destroys them

Hmm good suggestion

Bro I am not a professional writer. This is my first book. I know there are faults in it, but continuous badgering will not make them go away. I write what i can, that is juat how life is. You want the atory to go your way start your own book bro.

Now does he know the plot

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In the next chapter you will be answered

Really appreciate it[img=recommend]

Any writer deserves appreciation. Having the courage to wRite anything is five stars for me.Hoping for a great read.

Hmm well thank tou for the review. I basically have a soft spot for drama and self pitying protagonist’s so😑😑. I am somehat aware of my faults but well I am writing this story to basically just experiment so I am going to do it my way but constructive criticism is always welcomed

Who says he won’t 🤐

You are right but there is gonna be some personality development here. So hang tight[img=recommend]

There will be but bot yet because of teo reasons. 1- I am not experienced wnough in incorporating them in my writing yet 2-The MC is very young.

Its dIfficult to write as well but gotta do the grind work

Using my authors privilage here. Writing the start for me is always an issue. I have the story mostly planned and well this is not going to be show compliant. Hopefully this would come out as i intended

Using my author’s privilege here. I have started writing again after messing up several times, hopefyLully this time i can make it count.

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Nice nice niCe very very nice

From a veRy bad author to a very crative and good one. Make more paragraphs.