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Might be explained later but is it the usual system where 100 bronze = 1 silver 100 silver = 1 gold etc… ?
So does he get displayed like 10 level above the normal first or the second To give a concrete exemple Let’s take A (1st in ranking) B (2nd in ranking) and Leo If A is level 50 B is level 30 Does Leo appear to be level 40 or 60 ?
Only seven zombie for a horde…
1% for a 500% boost not a 10% boost like the rabbit
Just a though I have but if he’s in a illusion wouldn’t that capsule be fake and so wouldn’t show his IRL vital signs (except if the old mage decided to leave a hint) Making him catch the « High cardiac tension » or whatever from the corner of his eyes would be more realis tic
Finally a non dense mc
That Jay had accepted
Using real name when he’s under disguise please change it
I am starting this novel after more than a 100 chapter are published so maybe the change is already done later on in future chapter But could you (at least for skill) put arrow or something so that we instinctively know what was upgraded with each level up Going back and forth between chapter to see what changed is really annoying….
Calling it modern era is wrong if I remember correctly « modern » era is in or before the First Epochs
Green Fairy more than Fay
As the kobolds approched, the dragonling very important , here
Yeah I understood that tho it’s just the wording that make them seems affiliated to different dungeon 😂
Welcome back I didn’t have anything to proofread for sometimes so expect me to be extra thorough for your next chapters 😈 Good chapters most mistake are due to inattention this time 😡 if you want I can give you my discord to read chapter before you upload so that no p[arty or minldlessy happen again 😂 Good progression overall keep it up some tips and advice from this chapter observations (that might be wrong) : You tend to add up a lot after verbs even when it’s not necessary Still some difficulty to separate sentences and ideas per moment (Giony paragrah about lesser dragonling is such an exemple) Repetition have a long life (unfortunately) they are less present than before but still some try to avoid using However too much and While too (I thinks that’s the two repetition I saw in this chapter) Have a nice day (or night) 😊