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_Morpheos_

_Morpheos_

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Me gusta estar tranquilo, Soy flojo y quiero dormir

2019-07-07 đã tham giaChile
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  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_6 days ago
    trả lời iHateHarem

    Eres la unica persona los pies en la tierra en este lugar lleno de autistas adolescentes.

  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_3 months ago
    bình luận

    Creo que lo dejare aqui, parecia divertida al principio pero no hay nada mas que ver a mi parecer, es solo el protagonista haciendo algunas cosas, hablando con algunos personajes y ya esta, no es divertida, no digo que este mal escrita, pero es aburrido. Creo que ya llevo dos meses leyendo esto y sinceramente me aburrio, la espera no vale la pena.

  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_5 months ago
     công bố

    Se va notando como poco a poco el "escritor" va usando mas y mas Chat GTP, no estoy en contra de eso, pero se nota demasiado ademas de que Lucifer no se siente como Lucifer

  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_5 months ago
    bình luận

    Full chat gtp

  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_5 months ago
    bình luận

    It disgusts me, repugnance, hate, I just hate when they try to speak like Japanese, god reminds me of when I was an Otaku.

  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_5 months ago
    bình luận

    Honestly, I find it hard to empathize with the characters. It's not the first time I've read a plot like this, but normally they focus more on the process and the result of what is being created. Here the characters don't have a remarkable appearance or personality, so they feel more like a nuisance than anything else. I hope it gets better in the future.

  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_6 months ago
    bình luận

    The characters say a lot of rude things, in a matter of chapters that resource is going to be spent.

  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_7 months ago
    bình luận

    Me da risa esta version miniaturizada de Carrie

  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_9 months ago
     công bố

    1.- la calidad de escritura es normal, no es muy detallista con los entornos o personajes y sus transfondos, pero no te quita la imaginación detallando cada átomo de su cuerpo. 2.- buena actualización :) 3.- no ha llegado a nada por ahora pero tiene buen ritmo. 4.- un defecto que tiene es la poca información que muestra de los personajes, asumiendo que uno los conoce en primer lugar, esto depende del personaje, no todos. 5.- pense en un principio que el Universo se iba a ir a la mierda en el capitulo 10, ahora parece que podrian coexistir. Buena historia.

  • _Morpheos_
    _Morpheos_9 months ago
     công bố

    1.- It seems to be written at the same time that you are watching an episode of Rick and Morty, everything goes very fast and there is little general information about the place or environment. 2.- in chapter 3 it seems to be in the third person but it is being written in the first person, which is disconcerting, is the boy omnipresent? Or is it you, I don't know. 3.-This is more personal, I don't know how old the author is, but the Smith family and especially Rick are not good people, they are all defective in themselves, Rick is infinitely intelligent but that does not make him an idolizable character, nor does Beth , Jerry is normal, not an idiot, he is normal in my opinion, an average American. The story has its flaws but is readable within the standard.