Daoist_Lake
Whats Do You Want Know?
đang đọc
2808
Đọc sách
Huy hiệu
6Khoảnh khắc
775
Daoist_Lake19htrả lời Helia_King- Daoist_Lake19htrả lời Helia_King
- Daoist_Lake19htrả lời Helia_King
- Daoist_Lake20htrả lời Helia_King
- Daoist_Lake23hcông bố
Hmmm... Why must Custodes? Custodes and Silence is especially Must Loyal To Emperor in their DNA. it hard to removed. i prefer MC has Primach than Custodes. and MC has Psyker ability? from where this ability come? You must know, Psyker can do magically thing in Warhammer because Physical Reality and Warp is can't separate each other, thats why Psyker can borrow Power of Warp to Physical Reality. And because Physical Reality and Warp can't separate, they influence each other, and make Chaos/Gods born. Now the Power Scaling, who stronger being in Your DC? The Presence? The Goddess? or Warp Being (Chaos)? There too many plothole. Because MC can do Psyker Ability, i doubt Warp Exist in DC. i also doubt Chaos already exist in Warp. in Small Scale (Earth) your fanfic has no plot hole, because its just show-off MC power, and people just think MC just Metahuman. but in Big Scale (Universe, Multiverse) your story have too many Flaw and Plot Hole. and your Character even don't make DC Cosmic Being react, its more weird.
- Daoist_Lake1dcông bố
- Daoist_Lake1dcông bố
Nah. What meaning be Yandere if there has Harem Tag? in the end, MC Will have many women. and Yandere girl forced learn to accept MC. Yandere in my word = One Side Love to MC, Sacrifice/Kill anything for MC, never accept MC to love many women,Egoist, Jealousy, Thirst for MC attention and has many depravity Personality just for Mc. if there has Harem Tag, its not Yandere. Its just Menhera, never close to Yandere. Menhera can be fixed by anyone, but Yandere is never be fixed by anyone include MC.
- Daoist_Lake2dbình luận
WAAAGHH!!!!!!
While being forced to watch her smoking ship sink, Pyrrha readied her javelin and turned around. Her heroic spirits also prepared for battle, each one readying their weapons. That was when they saw their enemy. It was big — too big — and it writhed beyond the smoke and clouds. - Daoist_Lake3dtrả lời NiksElDrago
Actually, every nation have Bunshin like Country Name. Iwa = Earth Shadow. Kiri = Water Shadow (Mizu Bunshin) Kumo = Ligthting Shadow. but because MC live in Land Of Rain. i just think he have Water Shadow (Mizu Bunshin).
Byakuya responded with a curt nod and unfurled a detailed map of Kusagakure. "I've strategically placed several shadow clones throughout the village. At the stroke of midnight, they'll create a diversion, giving us the window we need to extract Karen." - Daoist_Lake3dtrả lời Daoist_Lake
*can't love each.... sorry for typo
Tayuya had met the man several times while she'd been siding with the grimmfolk. But Ruto's strength was still unknown to Tayuya. She'd never seen Ruto fight seriously. On top of that, Ruto's appearance was strange. The grimmfolk usually had deathly pale white skin and black sclera with vertically slit crimson pupils. That was a trait shared amongst all of them. But Ruto looked almost human. It was too strange. - Daoist_Lake3dbình luận
She wants more huuhh?
"He and I are not friends...". Muttered Shirone. - Daoist_Lake4dtrả lời Orange_Naru
Not like i don't like music Theme, but i must listen the music so i can understand the expression from Character. Music transcend beyond words, even i muggle about music, i somehow can understand if i listen it. And Thank You for you hard work. i Will support until this fanfic/novel finish.
Ch 141 A Date With the Little Sister (3) - Daoist_Lake4dbình luậnCh -42 In the World of Midgar 69 — The Dwarf Country Blutgang (5)
- Daoist_Lake6dbình luận
Confession?!
"Yes. I will tell you honestly. I have been afraid of you. I avoided fighting you, Morrigu, the Phantom Queen that brings death, and your Twelve Zodiac's Guardians. I felt fear at the prospect of fighting the great warriors who were united under your leadership as well. I was afraid, shivering, and I thought of you both while I was awake and in my dreams. I have no intention of denying my cowardice back then. It is all true." - Daoist_Lake7dbình luậnCh 130 Welcome Home, Tsun Tsun (4)
- Daoist_Lake9dtrả lời Mitsurei_Raizen
Too many Perfect Character with Perfect Body in Korean LN, like formula : For Men must have 6666 rule (6 pack abs, 6 figure salary, 6 feet tall, 6 inch D), and for Women they must have 8 Hourglass body, and brain rot. Until i think its not Korean People actually in reality. With that formula, its really not suprising author always make depressing ending, because author want make reader attach to beautiful/handsome died character or sympaty to MC suffering. But for me, its already Mainstream. because i already know, author always Break The Death Rule : Easy Resurrection, Rebirth, Regress, Loop, or have any magic to make died character alive again, to reach happy ending or sacrifice MC to make happy ending for other Character.
Jean can only frown after seeing the world he is going to go. He didn't know whether to feel relieved or panicked. Jean can remember at least how the plot goes. He is not exactly a die hard fan who can remember all of the details as he drop the novel on its final arc because of how stretchy and the relationship Hajin have with Nayun is hurting his head. The world is kind of like Solo leveling but instead of fighting the ruler's or the monarch there will be a demon king that will descend. (A/N: I legit got a headache when reading about Hajin and Nayun relationship.) - Daoist_Lake13dcông bố
Nice Story. Keep it on Library. I think MC has a potential to be Good Neutral Character. I just hope MC not so Over Power and MC can death if he make mistake in battle. Background story for MC with another Character is good, they (MC and His Friend) still think and act like toddler, its a good Point for me. Really i just hope MC is not so OP because it will ruin MC friendship and MC background. at least i hope MC friend can keep up with MC in term Battle Power.